That's okay. I thought it might be a bit 'Ew' as well, which was why I was a little surprised that no-one else had commented along that vein (sorry, bad joke). I think I might try and rewrite it so that there's a bit more of a build up to the bite, though I don't know that there's any way of writing vampires that doesn't end in Ew.
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Date: 2008-03-05 07:09 pm (UTC)