I'm glad other people are enjoying this story too, even though it was a fairly specific request. (Just so everyone knows, I did put an alternate request that was quite generic and had no Will Wood, in case my SS couldn't channel Will.
I am just enjoying every single line in this one. I love Will's interaction with Gran. (Poor Will, he's got a lot to learn.) Catherine is perfect - just how she is in my mind, physically and characterization-wise. Jonathan is the capable big brother, just like I envisioned, and his concern about Oliver rang so true from my Air story.
As head of the family, Jonathan could recite Will’s every indiscretion chapter and verse as he had often done when Will was growing up. As Gran said, Will was the brother who played Quidditch and Jonathan was the one who kept score.
Great line. And yes, Jonathan is pale. You even remembered that Will calls him Jon in Air.. *grins*
Oh, and this: I never did hear back from Will after we installed it, but then I know how you Healers lose track of time.” LOL!
I love all of the little details I'm learning about Will (You'd think I'd know this stuff already after dating him for so long!). :) Love the Italian stint, love the pub broom charming stuff.
I also loved how you built up Will's tension and stress - which of course led to worse back pain - in the last scene. That was done very well. I love torturing poor Will (see icon). And now I can't wait until the next part to see how he is, after passing out!
Thank you so much, Secret Santa. This is the best present ever!
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Date: 2007-12-22 03:23 pm (UTC)I am just enjoying every single line in this one. I love Will's interaction with Gran. (Poor Will, he's got a lot to learn.) Catherine is perfect - just how she is in my mind, physically and characterization-wise. Jonathan is the capable big brother, just like I envisioned, and his concern about Oliver rang so true from my Air story.
As head of the family, Jonathan could recite Will’s every indiscretion chapter and verse as he had often done when Will was growing up. As Gran said, Will was the brother who played Quidditch and Jonathan was the one who kept score.
Great line. And yes, Jonathan is pale. You even remembered that Will calls him Jon in Air.. *grins*
Oh, and this: I never did hear back from Will after we installed it, but then I know how you Healers lose track of time.” LOL!
I love all of the little details I'm learning about Will (You'd think I'd know this stuff already after dating him for so long!). :) Love the Italian stint, love the pub broom charming stuff.
I also loved how you built up Will's tension and stress - which of course led to worse back pain - in the last scene. That was done very well. I love torturing poor Will (see icon). And now I can't wait until the next part to see how he is, after passing out!
Thank you so much, Secret Santa. This is the best present ever!