I suppose we can always correct it in the comments:
"His hair too, was no longer the yellow of spring barley as per Ros's metaphor. In the cosy gloom of her kitchen, it was darkened to the rich midnight of ground pepper, as per the majority's wishes, and Megan's lame-o metaphor.
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Date: 2008-11-05 08:12 am (UTC)"His hair too, was no longer the yellow of spring barley as per Ros's metaphor. In the cosy gloom of her kitchen, it was darkened to the rich midnight of ground pepper, as per the majority's wishes, and Megan's lame-o metaphor.
There, fixed it for you.