I knew I should have put in the final lines about the happy ever after and then 'THE END' in big bold letters. Because surely, everyone knows that once the story's over, nothing can really change. And surely you understand the nature of implicit dialogue? I don't actually have to write the words 'I do' for it to be understood that you said them. Huh.
Also, if you want to haul your underwear out from under the bodice of your wedding dress up around your neck, go ahead. I wouldn't have thought it was the most flattering look, myself...
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Date: 2008-10-23 08:33 pm (UTC)I knew I should have put in the final lines about the happy ever after and then 'THE END' in big bold letters. Because surely, everyone knows that once the story's over, nothing can really change. And surely you understand the nature of implicit dialogue? I don't actually have to write the words 'I do' for it to be understood that you said them. Huh.
Also, if you want to haul your underwear out from under the bodice of your wedding dress up around your neck, go ahead. I wouldn't have thought it was the most flattering look, myself...