Aw, so nice. I love your scene setting first of all. (I love the English countryside and I could see it in my mind's eye) Then I love how you jumped right into their conversation and we found out Rosies emotions, the backstory, and Charlie's emotions in a few short lines. Lovely. I also liked the tree pig - he sounds like a mini porcupine. That was a nice touch.
I thought the screenplay was so hard! I now know that the novel form is for me!
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Date: 2007-07-10 09:50 pm (UTC)I thought the screenplay was so hard! I now know that the novel form is for me!