ext_142191 ([identity profile] moonette1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] girlyswot 2008-02-07 09:52 pm (UTC)

This was so fun to read!

Suddenly and urgently, she wanted to be home again. She hated this place with its bad smells and its inefficient lighting.

I think the inefficient lighting quip is my favorite one. LOL!

Nice work, Ros. TDU just emailed me telling me that she enjoyed this, but that next time she'd like a little more flangst. Just thought I'd pass that on to you. :)

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