ext_142188 ([identity profile] grandma-kate.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] girlyswot 2008-12-14 11:14 pm (UTC)

Now, who among us can write such delicious classic fluff? Percy and Audrey meet 'cute' and sparks fly. She physically restrains him and he notices quite a lot about how she looks and reacts to the contest the estate agent proposes. We know and like these characters and anticipate the happy ending.

After meeting a couple of the other tenants, I can hardly wait to enjoy more of them. I am a total devotee of Days of Destiny so enjoyed Linda very much. She's a sort of Luna with an attitude.

And talk about a hook to make us want to read the next segment-

' He almost didn’t care about the next flat at his point. Audrey had laughed – such a warm lovely sound.

Rivals, he reminded himself as she started up the stairs. We’re rivals for the same flat.'

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