ext_142191 ([identity profile] moonette1.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] girlyswot 2008-10-24 10:51 pm (UTC)

I do like Jo. Not sure if I fully agree about the telling how the POV character is feeling straight out. It seems better to draw the reader into the sensations rather than just blurt it out. What's your view on that one?
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